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gytis
03-24-2008, 06:30 AM
"I am writing in response to your advertisment"
Is this sentence not clumsy?
dangercat
03-24-2008, 08:09 AM
"I am writing in response to your advertisment"
Is this sentence not clumsy?

It's a bit. I would write and have written:

"I am writing to you today, in response to your advertisement in the "insert place where you saw advertisment".

:) Brook